These sheets show the feedback I received from my classmates on my artist presentation and animatic. My feedback was mostly positive but there was some things that I needed to improve.
The main thing that some people said is that I may need to add in more location to my video to keep it more varied and interesting rather than being in the same place and getting boring. Some ideas form a different setting could be the performer in the street (maybe getting arrested or in a fight) or somewhere like in an insane asylum (dressed in a straitjacket) or maybe something else.
Another point people made is that I should apply Goodwin's law more, so I will use my research into other artist to find genre conventions as well as making sure the lyrics and music fit the visuals of the video. I could also fit in the idea of voyeurism by using mirrors or screens somehow to let the viewer get a different perspective.
Someone said the pace of the video seems slow in my animatic but this will be corrected in the final video. Because of camera movement and the movement of the performer as well as quick cuts, the video will seem fast paced.
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